How to use “First” and “Second” when building a sentence
Our guest wrote:
"First it says that it is a very big village. Second, you are aimed at some place inside it."
That sentence works almost perfectly, you are right. But anyway we will explain the rule and maybe something else=) You have missing comma after First — a small mistake, but not a big problem. "You are aimed at "sounds like someone else is aiming you, not you doing the aiming (Better to say you aim at). Fix those two small things, and your sentence becomes perfect.
